Thursday, June 25, 2015

week 10: the hero/writing

I am blogging this because I really enjoy writing it
We were leaning to write a epic tale using five characters from this pic




Writing Purpose: To entertain the reader

WALT show our writing skills
What counts (Success Criteria for all writing choices):
  • structure our writing with a beginning, middle and end
  • best possible words
  • makes sense
  • different sentence starters
  • paragraphs (especially important for beginning, middle and end)

my writing goal : using more capital letters
characters :
the hero name : hunta
the girl name : amie
the golem name : no name
the wrestler's name : tom and john
the guards names : jeff and steve        
THE HERO
Once upon a time there was an adult called Hunta. He was an ordinary adult that lived in the medieval ages. He was a blacksmith in the middle of town far far away from the castle, but he had always wanted to go in the castle. There was a girl called Amie she was the princess. Every day he would go outside the castle and gaze up at the castle, and see if the gate would open.But it wouldn’t the guards Jeff and Steve would always say ‘’go away’’ after about 5 minutes. One day a golem started destroying the town, Hunta was terrified but he had always dreamed of being a hero. He had made a costume and he put it on and ran outside. First he tried to punch the golem and he got thrown across the street. ”BOOM”! Hunta’s blacksmith's got blowin up when one of  his potions got hit. He had some old friends that were wrestler's they were called Tom and John.He went and got them and they said “yes”. So they were walking down the road towards the golem.The golem tried an uppercut on Tom and he dodged it. Tom,John and Hunta ran down alleyway and decided a plan. They decided to do a super punch, a super punch is where you combined your strengths together and punch something.Tom,John and Hunta stood side by side and jumped and punched the golem and the golem went airborne.          
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Monday, June 22, 2015

week 9 : letter to dad

Image result for jet skiImage result for hot pools lake rotoiti rotoruaLiam hunter
room 21b to dad
parkvale school
hastings


Bill Hunter
Rotorua
(By the lake)


april 1st 2015


dear dad
thank you for taking me on the jet ski and the boat. I love going fishing and catching trout and gutting them. I love going driving to the hot pools and swimming in the lake. thank you for buying us bus tickets and sending us back to hasting. I love you dad from liam.

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Thursday, June 11, 2015

week 8 : five nights at freedys


I am blogging this because I really enjoy playing horror games.

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Five nights at Freddy's 

Five nights at Freddy's is a horror game. You are a security guard at a place called Freddy Fazz bears pizza. There are animatronics that come and try to stuff you inside a bear suit. They make scary noises to make you faint. 

Thursday, June 4, 2015

WEEK 6 : TRENCH LETTER



I am blogging this because I really enjoy writing it

we were learning to write trench letters








Dear wife[Sophie] and kids[Toby][ruby]


As I am writing  this letter it has gone quiet it has gone so quiet that I can hear my mates breathing as they sleep. I am writing this  letter at exactly 10.30 at night. The Germans has been striking back very hard  and I am struggling to survive.
My best friend Cameron just got shot and he has been sent back to New Zealand and he will be treated back there.
There  have been a lot of casualties.


Daddy will be home soon Toby and Ruby. I miss you all  very much


Lots of love,
Your husband,

Lieutenant Brad.