Tuesday, April 12, 2016

FREE CHOICE DESCRIPTION

FREE CHOICE DESCRIPTION
Purpose: to describe
WALT: create content with clear and interesting details
Success Criteria:
  • Quick plan to prepare for the writing task (brainstorm words or ideas)
  • Interesting beginning and ending
  • Using the senses (see, touch, taste, hear, smell)
  • Stays on the topic (of describing for the reader)
  • Uses the present tense
Stadium DescriptionImage result for new york giants vsImage result for panthersImage result for super bowl 50
I look down at the stadium packed with people I realized that I was at the super bowl 50 semi final. New York Giants vs the Carolina panthers. The first team to come out of the changing rooms was the giants because they were playing in home grounds the team was wearing big   blue shoulder pads under their blue shirts. The helmets have tiny bars on the front. The panthers come out we all stood up and sang the national anthem. The VIPS hold up the Americans flag while the two teams standing on either side of the green NFL field. I smell popcorn and hot dogs from the roaring crowd as the game starts. I start to get excited. A massive gasp goes over the stadium at kickoff! Game on the crowd goes wild.


I am blogging this because NFL is my favourite sport.
















2 comments:

  1. I love it and the infmashin keep it up

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  2. nice woke liam i love the infmashin keep it up

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