IPROUD 1

My Best Learning

This is my Scene Description

Task: Write a scene description of a picture you have chosen.

Success Criteria

• Quick plan to prepare for the writing task (brainstorm with words or ideas)
• Interesting beginning and ending
• Using the senses (see, touch, hear, smell)
• Includes strong descriptive words (adjectives)
• Uses the present tense

I turn around and see the most beautiful sight with a huge snowy and rocky jagged cliff that looks impossible to climb. The soft green grass stretches for miles over the mountain. A cool air breeze goes across my face. The soft fluffy clouds move all around over the freezing cold ocean. I smell the salty sea air through my nostrils. The small road hardly gets used, and is deteriorating. Unfortunately, it's time to say goodbye to this amazing scene.          

I am proud of this because I have put a lot of amazing words into this.

My biggest challenge was coming up with descriptive words.