Workshop Prove it

Workshop Prove It

I learnt rounding

Here is an example:

Script

Structure

Title:The Hero

Characters:The Hero (hunta) The Wrestler (tom and john) The Guards (jeff and steve) the golem ()

Scene/Setting : outside castle,outside blacksmith,down ally way.

Problem            :golem attack

Slition: super punch

Hunta :(outside of castle)I wish I could go in the castle

Jeff and Steve : go away shounent you be selling love potions

Hunta : why are the guards so mean (walking back to his house)

Hunta : (sighs)(going off to sleep)

Hunta :  (waking up) it's a beautiful morning (opening the curtains)

Tom and John : ( Bursting into the room) there's a golem attacking the city

Hunta : where

Tom : outside

Hunta : let's go (running outside)

John : ahhhhhhhhhh (flying through the air)  

Hunta : quick down here (running down an alleyway)

John : what should we do (looking over his shoulder)

Hunta : a super punch

Tom John and Hunta : ready go!! (charging at the golem)

Golem: trrrrhhhhhhh (flying away)

Tom John and Hunta : YAY!!!!!!! (dancing around)

Hunta : thank you

Tom and John : no problem (walking off)   

           

   

Happy Poem

HAPPY POEM

It’s better than burger king, Better than scary stories in the tent,  playing with my mates, hanging with my mates.

It’s better than bouncing on the trampoline at 1 in the morning, playing on my computer all day, wrestling my cat.

It’s better than rainy days, fun days, weekends and chicken and chips.

It’s better than staying up late and watching telly, better than going to the movies, having a spa bath.

WE’RE DOING SPORT TONIGHT!!!!    

FREE CHOICE DESCRIPTION

FREE CHOICE DESCRIPTION

Purpose: to describe

WALT: create content with clear and interesting details

Success Criteria:

• Quick plan to prepare for the writing task (brainstorm words or ideas)
• Interesting beginning and ending
• Using the senses (see, touch, taste, hear, smell)
• Stays on the topic (of describing for the reader)
• Uses the present tense

Stadium Description vs

I look down at the stadium packed with people I realized that I was at the super bowl 50 semi final. New York Giants vs the Carolina panthers. The first team to come out of the changing rooms was the giants because they were playing in home grounds the team was wearing big   blue shoulder pads under their blue shirts. The helmets have tiny bars on the front. The panthers come out we all stood up and sang the national anthem. The VIPS hold up the Americans flag while the two teams standing on either side of the green NFL field. I smell popcorn and hot dogs from the roaring crowd as the game starts. I start to get excited. A massive gasp goes over the stadium at kickoff! Game on the crowd goes wild.

I am blogging this because NFL is my favourite sport.

Reading task 2

I am blogging this because I really enjoged making this and I like to procted our seas.

IPROUD 1

My Best Learning

This is my Scene Description

Task: Write a scene description of a picture you have chosen.

Success Criteria

• Quick plan to prepare for the writing task (brainstorm with words or ideas)
• Interesting beginning and ending
• Using the senses (see, touch, hear, smell)
• Includes strong descriptive words (adjectives)
• Uses the present tense

I turn around and see the most beautiful sight with a huge snowy and rocky jagged cliff that looks impossible to climb. The soft green grass stretches for miles over the mountain. A cool air breeze goes across my face. The soft fluffy clouds move all around over the freezing cold ocean. I smell the salty sea air through my nostrils. The small road hardly gets used, and is deteriorating. Unfortunately, it's time to say goodbye to this amazing scene.          

I am proud of this because I have put a lot of amazing words into this.

My biggest challenge was coming up with descriptive words.

Week 2 : Favourite Task

My favourite task for this week is my favourite book report. I have chosen this because I really enjoyed writing it. I love to share my interests in reading and writing. I think that I have put alot of effort into this. I have showed personal best.