week 10: the hero/writing

I am blogging this because I really enjoy writing it
We were leaning to write a epic tale using five characters from this pic

Writing Purpose: To entertain the reader

WALT show our writing skills

What counts (Success Criteria for all writing choices):

• structure our writing with a beginning, middle and end
• best possible words
• makes sense
• different sentence starters
• paragraphs (especially important for beginning, middle and end)

my writing goal : using more capital letters

characters :

the hero name : hunta

the girl name : amie

the golem name : no name

the wrestler's name : tom and john

the guards names : jeff and steve        

THE HERO

Once upon a time there was an adult called Hunta. He was an ordinary adult that lived in the medieval ages. He was a blacksmith in the middle of town far far away from the castle, but he had always wanted to go in the castle. There was a girl called Amie she was the princess. Every day he would go outside the castle and gaze up at the castle, and see if the gate would open.But it wouldn’t the guards Jeff and Steve would always say ‘’go away’’ after about 5 minutes. One day a golem started destroying the town, Hunta was terrified but he had always dreamed of being a hero. He had made a costume and he put it on and ran outside. First he tried to punch the golem and he got thrown across the street. ”BOOM”! Hunta’s blacksmith's got blowin up when one of  his potions got hit. He had some old friends that were wrestler's they were called Tom and John.He went and got them and they said “yes”. So they were walking down the road towards the golem.The golem tried an uppercut on Tom and he dodged it. Tom,John and Hunta ran down alleyway and decided a plan. They decided to do a super punch, a super punch is where you combined your strengths together and punch something.Tom,John and Hunta stood side by side and jumped and punched the golem and the golem went airborne.